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Terry Freedman's avatar

Very poetic. Lovely photo, just right.

Rebecca Holden's avatar

Thank you, Terry! 🔥 I wrote something very similar in the 'flash fiction' session of your fabulous 60-minute writer course, and I thought I'd tweak it further to share here!

Terry Freedman's avatar

Yes, i recognised it. Well done

Beryl Hobson's avatar

Wow - that is lovely. I guess I relate to it having g been one of your glass customers.

Rebecca Holden's avatar

Gosh, thanks, Beryl! And not only a lovely customer but a very accomplished student, too! I know that you know exactly how it feels to let fire inspire! 😘❤️

Mary B's avatar

Bravo, Rebecca! Your Jim's photos and your words are the perfect combo for a quick Saturday-morning-with-coffee-what-will-the-day-bring-oh-look-a-post-from-Rebecca! moment. I can hear the soft bumping of moths against the window that only light-night-into-the-early-morning workers know. ❤️

Rebecca Holden's avatar

Oh, how lovely, Mary! Thank you so very much. xxx

Good Humor by CK Steefel's avatar

Beautiful poem and photo.

Rebecca Holden's avatar

Thank you so much, Carissa!

Sabrina Simpson's avatar

Very lovely Rebecca! And Jim’s photos are the perfect accompaniment. I’m enjoying your stretches into new formats.

Rebecca Holden's avatar

Oh, that’s so kind of you to say, Sabrina - thank you! I feel very nervous about this kind of writing, but even since the course has finished I’ve been having a play with more non-memoirish pieces. x

Sue Cauhape's avatar

Bravo! Isn't it fun to squeeze a story into a limit number of words? This one is a lovely start. Hope there're more coming.

Rebecca Holden's avatar

Thank you, Sue! And yes, it’s such fun! In class Terry had asked us to write a story in 100 words, and then condense it into 75. For homework we then had to squeeze it into 50!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤪

Sue Cauhape's avatar

That is indeed a challenge. I hope you post those for us to enjoy.

Sharron Bassano's avatar

Ah..."the inner moth"! A perfect metaphor. I do get the attraction! I have watched many a demonstration, but never gave it a try. This was like a peek over your shoulder. Thank you. My compliments to Mr. Snaps.

Rebecca Holden's avatar

I was certainly drawn to the flame, Sharron! I’d love to get back to it one day. And thank you so much. xxx

Gail Sawyer's avatar

This was awesome! My life with inspiring firings, was when I was a potter for a few short years. Then about four October’s ago, my son presented me with a glass blown palm sized Pumpkin, which I still use today as a paper weight to hold a sheer curtain back on the window sill. It’s something I haven’t tried yet, but I’m putting it on my bucket list! 🤗

Rebecca Holden's avatar

Oh wow, pottery is another fascinating craft - how wonderful! I love the sound of that pumpkin. If you look up ‘lampwork glass beadmaking’ you might well find an artist/instructor near where you are. I’m absolutely sure you’d love it! x

Gail Sawyer's avatar

I had a friend years ago that use to do lampwork glass beads. I even have a couple she did. At this point, I absolutely could not fit one more fun crafty thing on my plate! I’m easily distracted and barely finish one thing before moving onto the next. LOL!

I have a brand new Minolta digital camera I bought last year that I’ve yet to get thru the instructions on. (They write them sooo small!) I’m the kind of person that learns best by watching and hands on. I had no idea cameras now are way more than just point and shoot! I do get good shots with my iPhone, but it’s an older one, and I wanted a camera I could do close ups with for capturing the birds at my feeders. I think part of the problem too was the operator. 🤦🏻‍♀️ So since I am pretty much recovered from having had cataract surgery this month in both 👀’s, I’ll give the directions another shot. Ha! See what eye did there?

Rebecca Holden's avatar

Oh wow! I love that you’ve come across lampwork glass beads in person - that’s fantastic! I know what you mean about not finishing stuff before moving onto the next big thing - I’m exactly the same! Painting, drawing, hiking, baking….. you name it, I’ve started it and paused/stopped/restarted/said goodbye to it forever!

And gosh, photography absolutely baffles me - it feels so techy and complicated, and I just don’t have the patience for it! Jim mentions now and again how strange he finds it (as a photographer!) that I have never shown any kind of curiosity about taking pictures myself! It’s funny, isn’t it?!

Elizabeth Beggins's avatar

But...is it fiction? ☺️

Love the poetry of this post, Rebecca, Jim's photos included. Lush!

Rebecca Holden's avatar

Oh Elizabeth, you’re brilliant - no, it isn’t fiction - very well spotted! I found it absolutely fascinating on the course I’ve just completed that everything I’d written on Terry’s course came straight from my own experience. I think for a lot of my life I’ve thought that writing fiction = having to make up stories, but no, that’s not the case - it’s taken a very long time for it to dawn on me that there are plenty of my own stories which make, well, a story!

Elizabeth Beggins's avatar

Love that, Rebecca!

Donna McArthur's avatar

I love this Rebecca, your words and Jim's photos are gorgeous.

Rebecca Holden's avatar

So kind, Donna - very many thanks! (And I’m very lucky to have a photographer in the family!) x

Sharon Hudson's avatar

I just loved this poem, Rebecca, and such a beautiful photo, too! You spin words into lovely pieces of art, as well!

Rebecca Holden's avatar

Oh how lovely, thank you, Sharon! x

Start Bay Notebooks's avatar

I love the art of simplicity - it’s takes longer to write something short. 👍

Rebecca Holden's avatar

LOL - it does, doesn’t it? I love Mark Twain’s words: “I didn’t have time to write a short letter, so I wrote a long one instead.”

So true! 🤣

Start Bay Notebooks's avatar

I had this quote in mind - but I couldn't remember who said it!

Rebecca Holden's avatar

🤣 It’s a good one, isn’t it? 😁 A man of wise words, Twain!